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My Sunshine

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I got looked at funny today
By a big mean man all in black;
And his girlfriend was a bitch,
Wearing black and an upside-down pentacle.  
They were cool.  

And I was wearing a spring-yellow embroidered camisole
With a flowy, peach flowery skirt;
And my hair was in curls.  

Well, I’m sorry, big mean man and goth-girl,
But I left my pentacle at home today.
And I left my black and my bad attitude behind when I first picked up that pentacle.  
And I’m on my way to get filtered water and organic fruits,
And your frowns can’t darken my sunshine.
This is mostly non-fiction. There are a few things that have been changed for the sake of the story (fictionalized life, you know?), but it mostly happened to me today. I was getting off the bus at the post office, and they were getting on.

Critique would be lovely, as I'm not entirely certain about the last bit.

Thanks for reading!
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loukhos's avatar
*loves it in all it's ways* <3